Flexi school 10.06.15 animations to inspire writing

After a while term with no flexi school and the children’s holiday of a lifetime we were back! 

Using the incredible website “the literacy shed” we watched “partly cloudy” a Disney Pixar animation using personification. The children chose a creative writing activity to do after watching it.

7 year old Lily wrote a letter from Peck to Gus expressing what the stork could not say to His friend Gus. 

Dear Gus,

You need to make different animals!  I am dying!

Love Peck 

   

And 9 year old J wrote a conversation between two pelicans about Gus and Peck:

Bird: Ooh Peck has a right strange life.

Bird 2: I feel sorry for him. That Gus will be the end of him.

Bird 1: You shouldn’t feel sorry for him!  After all it’s his fault. Why does he even stay with Gus if he makes such horrible…

Bird 2: Now you be quiet! Peck is being a good friend. 

Bird 1: suppose so. Bye then.

Bird 2: Bye! 

 

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